Did you notice the difference?

In yesterday’s lesson on my blog, I wrote an improved paragraph for the ‘genetic engineering’ topic that we discussed a couple of weeks ago.

Have a look at the two paragraphs. Can you see the difference in the way I developed my ideas in the second version? This time I planned the paragraph before writing it!

Here’s my 5-sentence plan:

  1. Topic sentence about…

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